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Moon Festival Tomorrow is a good day.In China,We called Moon Festival or Mid-Autumn Festival . The Moon Festival is a very important day.It's symbol of the reunion.On this day,all of a family people are together to eat moon cake and enjoy the sight of the Moon .It's so happyness. But the now,We all have some pressure of the life,A lot of people cannot with their family.They should still work or cannot back to home. In China,we have some poetries are express this feel,For example:"独在异乡为异客,每逢佳节备思亲"

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Moon Festival

Tomorrow is a good day.

In China,We called Moon Festival or Mid-Autumn Festival .

In China we call this day the Moon Festibal or the Mid-Autumn Festival.

The Moon Festival is a very important day.It's symbol of the reunion.On this day,all of a family people are together to eat moon cake and enjoy the sight of the Moon .It's so happyness.

The Moon Festival is a very important day.  It's a symbol of reunion.  On this day, all the members of a family get together to eat moon cake and enjoy the sight of the moon.  It's such a happy occasion.

But the now,We all have some pressure of the life,A lot of people cannot with their family.They should still work or cannot back to home.

But now, everyone is facing the pressures life offers.  A lot of people cannot be with their family.  They have to work or just cannot go back home. 

In China,we have some poetries are express this feel,For example:"独在异乡为异客,每逢佳节备思亲"

In China we have poems that express this feeling.  For example: "All alone in a strange land, a lonely stranger am I; Thoughts of my kindred redouble on every festive day.." (Translation from http://chinesepoemsinenglish.blogspot.com/2009/11/wang-wei-thinking-of-my-brotherson-9th.html)

 

 

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Moon Festival

Tomorrow it is a nice day. In China, we call it the Moon Festival or the Mid-Autumn Festival .

The Moon Festival is a very important day. It's a symbol of the reunion. On that day, each family will together eat the moon cakes and enjoy the moon .It will be very happy.

however, people become more busy than before. ,A lot of people cannot live with their family members.They should go to work and cannot come back home.

In China,we have some poetries expressing this feel of homesick, For example:"独在异乡为异客,每逢佳节备思亲"

 

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