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I want to be a master!!! Hello everyone!!! Currently I'm studying a master degree in mecatronics and I really motivided about it. I chose this carrer because it's a good one and i really want to adquire new knowledge not just about my carrer I mean i want to improve my knowledge in general. Despite I know it won´t be easy I'll do my best to get it and I´ll never give up!!!

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I want to be a master!!!

No--about the only way to say this is:

I want to get my master's degree.

 

Someone with a doctor's degree is called "a doctor." But someone with a master's degree is not called "a master."

 

Hello everyone!!! Currently I'm studying a master degree

Currently I'm studying for a master's degree

 

in mecatronics

in Mechatronics

 

However, it is such a new field that I had never heard of it before.

 

and I really motivided about it.

and I really am motivided motivated about it.

Better word choice:

and I really am excited about it.

and I really am enthusiastic about it.

 

I chose this carrer because it's a good one

I chose this career because it's a good one

 

and i really want to adquire new knowledge

and I really want to acquire new knowledge.

 

and I really not just about my carrer I mean i want to improve my knowledge in general.

I also want to improve my knowledge in general, not just about my career.

or perhaps

I am eager to learn about everything!

 

Despite I know it won´t be easy I'll do my best to get it and I´ll never give up!!!

Despite knowing it won't be easy, I am determined to do my best and I'll never give up!

 

Buena suerte, y espero que el esfuerzo esta divertido además de desafiante.

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I want to be a master!!!

Hello everyone!!! Currently I'm studying a master degree in mecatronics and I really motivided about it. I chose this carrer because it's a good one and i really want to adquire new knowledge not just about my carrer I mean i want to improve my knowledge in general. Despite I know it won´t be easy I'll do my best to get it and I´ll never give up!!!

 

I want to be a master!

Hello everyone! Currently I'm getting a master's degree in ??? and I am really motivated. I chose this career because it's a good one (why? because it pays well, or the hours are flexible...?) and I really want to learn, not just for my career, but I want to increase my knowledge in general. Despite knowing it won't be easy, I'll do my best to get it (attain it, achieve it, master it) and I'll never give up!

 

-You study the subject/material, not the degree.

-"I really motiveded" - In Spanish, would you not say it "Estoy muy motivado"? It is the same here, use should use estar/am.

-What is mecatronics?

-acquire, not adquire

-career not carrer

-in some places I substituted or suggested words that I thought sounded more natural

 

Buena suerte. Dime si quieres hablar sobre skype. Te sigue ahorra.

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