Maybe a little rage or discontent will be enough to think and write something.
Just writing something is about introducing myself to others.
For example, the speech that I like some idols is just revealing myself. of course, I could know what he or she is so that I would be attracted. and He or she will be my ideal type. But SO WHAT?
Nobody wondered my opinion. Nobody has asked for my opinion.
Exchanging "I" to "We", seeing the whole pictures of the consequences, will be the first step to get the universality.
To be continued.
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Maybe a little rage or discontent will help me to think about and write something.
I write to introduce myself to others.
For example, saying that I like some idols is just revealing an aspect of myself. Of course, how could I know what he or she is like so that I would be attracted? Or if he or she would be my ideal type? So what?
Nobody considered my opinion. Nobody has asked for my opinion.
By changing "I" to "We", we can see the whole picture of the consequences, which is the first step to universality.
To be continued.
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김기수, I tried helping out with a correction. Everything you wrote was correct, but I thought it sounded stilted, so I tried to make a correction below that would hopefully flow and sound more natural. I hope that helps.
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