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TİME .... ZAMAN Time is like a water , sometimes glassy sometimes stormy ... And we cant say it "please stop ". when we feel hurt or feel so happy , we want to be frozen in that time. so we want to stop the time . Time makes a game for us and we dont realise it. Because we can avoid to think about it . Because ıf we start to think about it , we can feel regret ... we are not perfect , all people lost at least one thing . on the other hand we have lots of good things . why do we look at empty side in the glass .? ıf we could see full part , we would be happy all our life .... so time is passing like a water , like a wind .... but we have full side in the glass , we can fall down but we should not give up our hope .. when the morning come , we should see our face on the mirror with smiles and we should say that " God give us piece of love in my heart ,this love give me power and ı know where there's life there's hope" ....

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TİME .... ZAMAN

Time is like a water , sometimes glassy sometimes stormy ...and we cant say it "please stop ". when we feel hurt or feel so happy , we want to be frozen in that time. so we want to stop the time . Time makes a game for us and we dont realise it. Because we can avoid to think about it . Because ıf we start to think about it , we can feel regret ... we are not perfect , all people lost at least one thing . On the other hand we have lots of good things . why do we look at empty side in the glass .? ıf we could see full part , we would be happy all our life ( could be " we could be happy our whole life)  ....
so time is passing like a water , like a wind .... but we have full side in the glass , we can fall down but we should not give up our hope .. when the morning come , we should see our face on the mirror with smiles and we should say that " God give us piece of love in my heart ,this love give me power and ı know where there's life there's hope"
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your notebook entries is nicely. 

iam learning english like you  so i just found little things that maybe ca help you. 

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Time can never mend what you loss , but it can relent your suffering .

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Time is like a long river which is capricious . Human beings are easy to be retarded by time as they do not really know time is the most precious treasure in the world  . During personal chaos , we prefer to hope time can pass by swiftly , yet , in the meanwhile of happiness, we hope time can stop at this moment forever as  we want to keep everything so perfect .   However, it is absolutely impossible , every one will get older day after day  and nothing is immortal . If you were willing to see the empty side of a glass , you would find void is so perfect and beautiful .  People who are not always happy  perhaps require void to keep them sensible .

 

Where there is love , there is hope . Where there is hope , there is future . You face in the mirrow can contrast you soul in your heart . I wish you could embrace more love to confront so much suffering ahead . It is inevitable to stumble in failure during your life time , but yet , looking to the bright side is critical . Most sucesses are based on trial and error . In my country , we have an old saying : 1 success is established on a basis of 9 falures . 

 

God bless you

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