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3rd, September, 2013, Tuesday I have a fantastic time with my friends. I did scuba diving, cycling at the island of Tokyo. Scuba diving was very exciting! I could see a lot of fishes before my eyes. I want to do again someday.

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3rd, September, 2013, Tuesday

I have a fantastic time with my friends. I did scuba diving, cycling at the island of Tokyo. Scuba diving was very exciting! I could see a lot of fishes before my eyes. I want to do again someday.

 

I had a fantastic time with my friends. I did scuba diving, and cycling, on an island off Tokyo. (東京の島ですか？どういう意味ですか？）Scuba diving was very exciting! I could see a lot of fishes before my eyes. I want to do it again someday.

 

Good English, well done!

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