My Brother
My brother is 21 years old,he is a very shy boy,especially when he was in the face of the girl.But I kown he is a good boy,he likes cooking and doing housework.It is a pity that he does not loving learning.He had worked for 2 years,he is an aspirant people.My brother is very kind to me,he is never angry with me and will remember my birthday.To my surprise,he do not have a girlfriend yet.I consider to introduce a girl to him.
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My Brother
My brother is 21 years old,he is a very shy boy,especially when he was in the face of the girl.But I kown he is a good boy,he likes cooking and doing housework.It is a pity that he does not loving learning.He had worked for 2 years,he is an aspirant people.My brother is very kind to me,he is never angry with me and will remember my birthday.To my surprise,he do not have a girlfriend yet.I consider to introduce a girl to him.
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My brother is 21 years old. He is a very shy boy, especially when he is in front of a girl. But I know that he is a good boy (since) he likes cooking and doing housework. It is a pity that he does not like to learn. He was working for 2 years and he is an ambitious person. My brother is very kind to me, he is never angry at me and always remembers my birthday. To my surprise, he does not have a girlfriend yet. I might consider introducting a girl to him.
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Good job! You got the basic grammar right, I just made the sentences a bit prettier :-)
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Maybe you are right,I respect his decision.
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Don't do that! :) As far as I know, the guys in Asia are extremely shy in the majority, compared with Westerners. :) You may by chance develop a complex about girls in him or something else. Let it all come naturally. He's still a guy and guys usually like girls (if they don't have various kinds of pathologies) and cannot live without them, so everything is gonna be all right! :)
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