Vannda's notebook entry: Nov 02, 2010 Today I start a new day , my goal is going on with my fantastic mind , I seem upset myself because everyone have a good goal ,but I choose the wrong street . My f

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Vannda's notebook entry: Nov 02, 2010 Today I start a new day , my goal is going on with my fantastic mind , I seem upset myself because everyone have a good goal ,but I choose the wrong street . My failure make me hopeless one day to one day . Today morning I will open my new page again. Good day will arrive soon in my mind .

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Vannda's notebook entry: Nov 02, 2010

Today I start ~~a new day~~ anew. My goal is ~~going on with~~ to improve my fantastic mind. I ~~seem~~ am upset with myself because everyone seems to have a good goal, but I ~~choose~~ chose the wrong street . My failure makes me hopeless ~~one day to one day~~ from day to day. ~~Today~~ This morning I will open ~~my new page again~~ a new page. A good day will arrive soon in my mind .

Note : Sorry if I changed the meaning of anything you wrote.. I suck at poetry. lol.

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