A personal statement for applying a student visa.Please help me

Personal Statement
The My decision to study at your esteemed the University of Queensland was made after I had been a language teacher for two years in at a middle school in China.

Many people wondered why I decided to give up my steady path of in life along with a well-paid job and planned
to go abroad. I think the pursuit of knowledge and potential experience of living abroad are always both significant motivations inspiring me to finish my masters degree in Australia, one of the most developed countries in the world, distinguished by its advanced education system.

The University of Queensland is my preferred education provider university, because of its longstanding reputation for quality and highly-awarded reknowned teaching staff.

My intended major is Chinese Translation and Interpreting which is relevant to my academic and employment background. I hope that through a two-year full-time study at a world-ranked university and within an English-speaking environment, I will be able to become an excellent translator in the literature publishing field (word order, rephrase: "in the field of literature publishing") or a college teacher in China.