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help me please :c
Many people have or known one or more than one places for relaxing. Reach (Rich) people waste their free time on luxurious places, expensive Hotels and spas. People who (do not) have not enough money waste their time in camping, other groups in travels and journeys not so long (just for the money). But what happened with (to) us, with (to) the people who enjoy other kinds of places, not luxurious, more less expensive places, what does happened with (to) the people who enjoy the morning, listen to the birds singing, the sound of the wind through the trees, a campfire with your friends, where you can sing and talk face to face with yours partners. All of this different point you will find in a country side or forest, you just need to take your back bag, put in a bottle with water, food, and the enthusiasm. Forget your computer for a day, do not pay for a hotel, and just enjoy the simple things of the life.
<This was a very paragraph as you were able to get across ideas even if they weren't completely correct grammatically.
'With' should be used as when doing an action with someone or something. Changing this to 'to' makes one thing affect another as in "happen to someone", "need to take up your bag".>
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