One my day or again hedgehog
Early morning. Elizabet (my hedgehog) and I were cleaning my bicycle. I put many magazines on the floor, Elizabet was digging it with pleasure. Hedgehog very likes all crunchy.
The doorbell rings. It is my uncle and aunt. Aunt like to play with Elizabet, but Elizabeth does not share the same feelings. It transform in the game "Catch up with a hedgehog". Elizabed runs from one room to another and It hides.
When my aunt left me I couldn't find the hedgehog. I thought "It is excellent hiding, but I am late on job". I folded all newspaper in bag and throwed out in trashcan.
When I come from my job my Elizabet wait me usually about door. Today I didn't find it in her's place. I am searching it in all corner, in all cupboard. Nothing. And I decided that Elizabet climbed in garbage bag and I put her in trashcan with newspaper. I went in my courtyard and was searching her in four trash cans. I didn't find her. I checked all package.I cried.
When I returned in home, I heard as Elizabet yawns. She sweetly slept in my cupboard in my yoga's rug))))
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A day with my hedgehog
Early morning. Elizabeth (my hedgehog) and I were cleaning my bicycle. I put many magazines on the floor, Elizabeth was digging it with pleasure. Hedgehogs likes it all to be very crunchy.
The doorbell rings. It is my Uncle and Aunt. My Aunt likes to play with Elizabeth, but Elizabeth does not share the same feelings. It transform into the game "Catch up with a hedgehog". Elizabeth runs from one room to another and hides.
When my aunt left me I couldn't find the hedgehog. I thought "this is excellent hiding, but I am late for wok". I folded all the newspaper in bag and threw it out into trashcan.
When I come from my job my Elizabeth waist me usually near the door. Today I didn't find her in her usual place. I am searching for her in all the corners and the cupboards. Nothing. I decided that Elizabeth might have climbed into the garbage bag and I may have put her in trashcan with newspaper! I went into my courtyard and was searching around for her in the four trash cans. I didn't find her. I checked all the packages.I cried.
When I returned in home, I heard Elizabeth yawning. She had sweetly slept in my cupboard in my yoga's rug))))
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