senior sister!

It was Friday yesterday!I have no class yesterday!So I went to the downtown with my friends to buy some articles for daily use!And we ate some foods!Next week We will be a senior sister apprentice！Because the freshman come to the school!Time passed quickly，and I will graduate next year!

Senior Sister!

It was Friday yesterday and as (!)  I had (have) no class (yesterday!So)  I went (to the) downtown with my friends to buy some daily essentials/essential items  (articles for daily use!) and also to eat (And we ate some foods!) Next week, we will be (a) senior sister apprentices  (!) because the freshman will arrive. (come to the school!)  Time passes so (passed) quickly，and I am due to (will) graduate next year!

senior sister!

It was Friday yesterday! and I had I have no classes yesterday! so I went to the downtown with my friends to buy some articles for daily use (enough '!' - this is unnecessary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (haha) ) and we ate some food for lunch. Next week we will become a senior students(?) sister apprentices (? what is this?)  Because the freshman come to the are starting at school. Time passes/has passed quickly，and I will graduate next year!

Senior sister!

It was Friday yesterday. I didn't have no class yesterday, So so I went to the downtown with my friends to buy some everyday items. articles for daily use!And  We also ate some foods food. Next week We we will be a senior sister apprentices ! Because to the new freshman coming to the school. Time has passed quickly, and I will graduate next year!

Nice job! Make sure to listen to Frank's comment about using exclamation points (!) and spaces after periods and commas.

Senior sister.

It was Friday yesterday. I had no class yesterday, so I went to the downtown with my friends to buy some articles for daily use.  We also ate some foods! Next week we will be a senior sister apprentice, because the freshman come to the school. Time has passed quickly，and I will graduate next year!

[Good work.  Exclamation points (!) are only used if you said something about which you would be excited - especially happy or angry.  Also remember to put a space after all periods and commas.]