I want to lose weight.
I am glad it is friday.I went out for a seafood hot- pot dinner with my boyfriend.It was delicious.I regretted eatting so much when i finished dinner.Actually i am trying to lose weight these days.My sister is getting married next month and I will be the maid of honor.I promised my sister that i will be thinner.In fact ,I am not fat but they are so slim. I will do some exercise at weekends to burn less fat.I wish i will become much more beautiful.Please point out the mistakes. Thank you very much
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
I want to lose weight.
I am glad it is friday.I went out for a seafood hot-pot dinner with my boyfriend.It was delicious.I regretted eatting so much when i finished dinner.Actually i am trying to lose weight these days.My sister is getting married next month and I will be the maid of honor.I promised my sister that I will would be thinner.I n fact ,I am not fat but they are so slim. I will do some exercise at weekends to burn less (more)? fat. I wish to become much more beautiful ("I wish to" is very formal and less common than "I want to...") .Please point out the mistakes. Thank you very much
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
