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I did exercise. People says, We all need to exercise regularly. my coworkers and friends talk about important exercise experience always and they do that. I am very suprised to see they had been doing exercise for example swim, tennis, badminton and so on. and then I am started exersice at gym. I learned about machinery of exercise and I did. When I came back at home, I was so tired. I got a feeling that(?) I didn't control my body. so, I lied my bed and suffered from muscular pain. ㅜㅜ I don't know Why we need exercise? It's so painful... It's no use regretting now, becasue I paied money 3 month, already. Dear GOD looking after me... :(

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I did exercise.

People says say, "We all need to exercise regularly." My co-workers and friends always talk about important exercise experience the importance of exercise always and they do that it. I am very suprised to see they had have been doing exercise, for example swimming, tennis, badmington and so on. And then so I am started exersice to exercise at the gym. I learned about the exercise machinery of exercise and I did used it.
When I came back at got home, I was so tired. I got had a feeling that (?) I didn't control my body. So, I lied laid on my bed and suffered from muscular pain. ㅜㅜ
I don't know why we need exercise? It's so painful... It's no use, I'm regretting it now, becasue because I paied paid money for 3 months already.

Dear GOD looking look after me... :(

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I did exercise.

People says, We all need to exercise regularly. my coworkers and friends talk about important exercise experience always and they do that. I am very suprised to see they had been doing exercise for example swim, tennis, badminton and so on. and then I am started exersice at gym. I learned about machinery of exercise and I did.
When I came back at home, I was so tired. I got a feeling that(?) I didn't control my body. so, I lied my bed and suffered from muscular pain. ㅜㅜ
I don't know Why we need exercise? It's so painful... It's no use regretting now, becasue I paied money 3 month, already.

Dear GOD looking after me... :(

 

People says " We all need to exercise regularly."  I was surprise to learn that  my coworkers and friends share  their exercise routine such as swimming, tennis, badminton, and so on.  Listening to their conversation got me motivated to join a gym. I paid for 3 months membership, once I learn how to operate the machinery I started to exercise. 

When I got home from the gym I was so tired and in pain that I lay in bed.

Why do we need to exercise?  

Dear God,

Please look after me ....:(

 

 

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Congratulations on starting to exercise. It is very difficult in the beginning and your muscles will be sore. In a few days you will feel much better. Just keep trying, especially since you already paid for three months.
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Exercise is good for you. I need to start going back I definitely out of shape
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exercise is good!

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