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My lover and over everything, my bestfriend
For me, over everything, love must have mutual comprehension and complicity over everything. I've found it these qualities of love in through my boyfriend, we're together who has been with me since March, 2012. Like every normal couple, we argue, sometimes we cry together and we laugh a lot, but we are never apart aren't apart in any moment. And The real meaning of "At happiness and sadness, at health and illness, at richness and poorness until the death put us apart" is well-know by to us. I thank God everyday for the blessing thet he put in my life. A lots of people think say that "oh Meggie, you are too young to think about it", or "Don't be stupid! Go ahead and have fun!". However, for me, our love is worth more than those people's concept of 'fun'. every "fun" on other's concepts. Because This is because I know that he will be there to hear me, to hold my hand, to dry all my tears and to laugh with me. We found the love, the true one and we'll never let it die. <3
*Complicity: The state of being involved with others in an illegal activity or wrongdoing. [The use of complicity is completely irrelevant here.]
*"Ive found it in my boyfriend": 'it' does not tell the reader what you are saying you found in your boyfriend.
*"I've found it in my boyfriend": You are talking about the quality of love that is mutual comprehension/understanding and the other, which you wrote incorrectly as complicity (therefore I do not know). "Mutual comprehension" can not be found IN your boyfriend, because it is an understanding that BOTH of you have come to- through each other.
Mutual: Experienced or done by each of two or more parties toward the other or others.
Therefore, you cannot possibly find "mutual comprehension" in one individual alone.
*Try to remember not to start sentences with 'and' or 'Because'. Grammatically, it is incorrect to do so.
*A lots of people think say that "oh Meggie, you are too young to think about it", or " Don't be stupid! Go ahead and have fun!". : Do not say 'a lots' because when you say 'a lot', it means that 'lot' is by itself. 'Lots' is a plural word, so you cannot count it with 'a'. Therefore, it is incorrect to ever say 'a lots'.
*A lots of people think say that A lots of people think say that "oh Meggie, you are too young to think about it", or " Don't be stupid! Go ahead and have fun!".: You do not know if people have thought these thoughts, because it is their brain- not yours. Thus, you cannot assume that they have thought this. I changed it to 'say that' because you used " to indicate that "oh Meggie, you are too young to think about it" and "Don't be stupid! Go ahead and have fun!" are said. Therefore, I am assuming that you have heard these exact words before.
Another thing to watch out is that; when you are listing multiple things, you must remember to use 'and' before the last item you are listing.
E.g. I love to eat apples, oranges, pineapples, cherries and peaches. <- correct
However, if you wrote 'I love to eat apples, oranges, pineapples, cherries, peaches.', it would be incorrect.
Also, you must also use 'and', when you are listing a few examples of something.
E.g. I love to eat apples, oranges, pineapples, cherries, peaches and many more fruits.
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