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The Real Felipe Fortress
For my English class, I have to make a writing write a short essay about some a place in my city and I came up would like to talk about the Real Felipe Fortress. I hope I have written well.
The Real Felipe fortress is a military building that was built in the eighteenth century. It's in the port of Callao and It worked served to for protect them from the pirates. Its name was given It was named in honor to of King Felipe V king. It's one of the few works of military architecture that existin Peru and is the largest built the largest Spanish-built building by spanish in America. The fort has the shape of an irregular pentagon. Currently its use is tourism, serving as the headquarters of the Army Museum of Peru.
Great work. I highlighted "them" in blue because I wasn't sure to whom you were referring.
The Real Felipe Fortress
For my English class, I have to make an essay about some place in my city and I came up to talk about the Real Felipe Fortress. I hope I wrote it well.
The Real Felipe fortress is a military building that was built in eighteenth century. It's in the port of Callao and its main purpose was to protect people from the pirates. its name was given in honor to felipe the V king. It's one of the few works of military architecture that exists in Peru and is the largest built by Spanish in America. the fort has the shape of an irregular pentagon. Currently its use is for tourism, serving as the headquarters of the Army Museum of Peru.
Good job! :)
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