My last day
I remember my last day in school. I was think that last day is start for new day. I was eager to attend my first day in university. However، I had feeling in my heart that I will forget all my wonderful life in school with unlimited friends that live nearby my home.
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Correction:
My last day
I remember my last day at school. I was thinking that the last day is the beginning of a new day. I was eager to attend my first day at the university. However, I had the feeling within my heart that I will forget about my wonderful memories I had in high school with all my friends.
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Hello!
I agree with the use of prepositions in the correction below, but just want to comment on your choice of words:
1) "all my wonderful life" sounds awkward. You can say *all my wonderful times in school*.
2) "unlimited friends" sounds funny. I think you meant to say *many friends*.
3) "that live ..." is okay, but I would suggest using who instead of that when you're referring to people.
4) "nearby" doesn't quite sound right to me. I think near is more correct in your sentence.
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