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Vegetarianism According to a recent statistic, there are as many 6 to 8 million vegetarians in the US alone. This staggering number indicates that vegetarianism is not just a present- day fashion. However, many meat- eaters still vigilant about the balance of a vegan diet. In my opinion, I am in favour of vegetarianism because of several reasons. One of the most outstanding reason is that many people choose a vegetarian diet for moral of health reasons. After sticking to vegan diets, people are apt to be more serenity because of not questioning the treatment of animals in factory farms. Furthermore, a balanced vegetarian diet can help human lower the risk of a number of diseases, including cardiovascular disease, cancer, diabetes and obesity. Vegetarians just eat vegetables and fruits, that can effectively cut down on fat and protein which are high in meat. Therefore, people can maintain a healthy weight and a good shape as well. Another important reason is about pollution. More specifically, a report estimates that the industrial raising of meat animals generates about a fifth of the world greenhouse gases. Moreover, it either increases the usage of other pollutants such as pesticides and consumes large amount of scarce resources, including water, land and oil. As a result, by eating million tons of meat per day, humans are destroying their own environment. In that case, vegetarianism is obviously a more eco- friendly lifestyle. In addition, to some extent, meatlessness is also a useful measure of animal conservation.

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Vegetarianism

According to a recent statistic, there are as many as 6 to 8 million vegetarians in the US alone. This staggering number indicates that vegetarianism is not just a present-day trend. However, many meat-eaters are still vigilant about the balance of a vegan diet. In my opinion, I am in favour of vegetarianism because of several reasons.
One of the most outstanding reasons is that many people choose a vegetarian diet for the moral of it being healthy. After sticking to vegan diets, people are more willing to question the treatment of animals in factory farms. Furthermore, a balanced vegetarian diet can help a human lower thier risk of a number of diseases, including cardiovascular disease, cancer, diabetes and obesity. Vegetarians just eat vegetables and fruits, which can effectively cut down on fat and protein which are high in meat. Therefore, people can maintain a healthy weight and stay in good shape as well.
Another important reason is about pollution. More specifically, a report estimates that the industrial raising of meat animals generates about a fifth of the world's greenhouse gases. Moreover, it increases the usage of other pollutants such as pesticides and consumes large amounts of scarce resources, including water, land and oil. As a result, by consuming over a million tons of meat per day, humans are destroying their own environment. In this case, vegetarianism is obviously a better eco-friendly lifestyle. In addition, to some extent, being a vegetarian is also a good step to conserving animals.

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No, i am not, Andi. This is just an essay :) I am practicing for the Ielts test :) So happy to receive your comment :x
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All goods points. Are you vegan?
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Thank for your help Alex, I have just searched about the difference between vegan and vegetarian on the internet ,your opinnion is right . It is a topic on my ielts writing :)
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I am not sure you understand terminology completely; a vegan is somewhat who omits animal products all-together, whereas the term 'vegetarian' could describe someone who eats also dairy and possibly eggs. There are more descriptive terms within that for people who eat dairy but not eggs and so on. I am a vegetarian, although I don't eat dairy very often and I don't like eggs. Maybe a 'lacto-vegetarian' is a person who eats diary but not eggs.

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