Mail to Anne about a trip to the mountain

Hi Anne
Nice to hear from you

It´s a good notice news that you are coming next week.
We´ll be able to do whatever you want because i´m on my summer holidays but there is a problem because I've arranged a trip in to the mountains with my friends for the weekend.
If you want I can postpone this trip for until another weekend but if I were you, I would go come with us because you´re going to be you'll probably have a nice day.
First, as soon as at sunrise well go up to the top of the Moncayo mountain with our bags and tents.
Then, we´ll go fishing in the river for some big and unquiet (don't know exactly what you mean here) trouts before having lunch.
After that, I´ll cook a some very big, red and juicy pieces of meat for everybody so and then we´ll have to sleep a considerable nice long siesta.
In the afternoon we´ll be able to go for a walk around that incredible and extraordinary place and finally my friends and I will go into the tents to spend the night.
I think it would be a great idea if you´ll come came with us
Best wishes

Correction

Sounds better to me

Good job