Can knowledge really change our destiny ?
When I was a little boy, adults always told me : the knowledge can change your destiny, so if you would like to own more better life in the future, study hard! However, recent years, I noted a phonomenon that the higher your education background is, more difficult to find a job. But in western countrys, the situation is opposite. In my opinion, China government should pay more attention to this phonomenon, and adopt necessary mearsures as soon as posible.
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Can knowledge really change our destiny ?
When I was a little boy, adults always told me that the knowledge can change your destiny, so if you would like to have a better life in the future, study hard! However, in recent years, I noted a phonomenon that the higher your education background is, more difficult it is to find a job. But in western countries, the situation is opposite. In my opinion, the Chinese government should pay more attention to this phenomenon, and adopt necessary mearsures as soon as posible.
[Good work. The plural of anything ending in 'y' is 'ies'. Duty -> duties; study -> studies; country ->countries]
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