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My real letter to recruiter. Hi, Xxxx! I'm writing you in reply to your LinkedIn message. You asked me to provide some information about my motivation goals. As you may have already noticed my last workplace was Vietnamese search engine Xxxxx but 3 months ago I quit that place and now I'm actively searching for a job. I'm ready to consider different opportunities, but at the moment my priority is to get experience working abroad (USA, Canada, UK). It would be ideal if I work in Moscow in some international project until H1B visa is ready. Of course if offer is really attracting in terms of project tasks, career growth and salary I'll stay in Moscow for longer time. I know little about Xxxx team located in Moscow. Could you please elaborate more on it? FYI I've attached my resume to this letter. -- Regards, Vladimir

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My real letter to a recruiter.

Hi, Xxxx!

I'm writing you in reply to your LinkedIn message. You asked me to provide some information about my motivation goals.

As you may have already, noticed my last workplace was the Vietnamese search engine Xxxxx but 3 months ago I quit that place and now I'm actively searching for a job. I'm ready to consider different opportunities, but at the moment my priority is to get experience working abroad (USA, Canada, UK). It would be ideal if I could work in Moscow in some international project until my H1B visa is ready. Of course if an offer is really attracting attractive in terms of project tasks, career growth and salary I'll stay in Moscow for longer time.

I know little about Xxxx team located in Moscow. Could you please elaborate more on it? FYI I've attached my resume to this letter.


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Regards,
Vladimir

 

This is great, your writing is at a very good level. Just be careful with your articles (a,an,the) before nouns.

 

The noun "Recruiter" = a singular countable noun, so we need to put "a" before it.

 

The noun "Offer" = a singular countable noun, so we need to put "an" before it.

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