Request for information on scholarship (IELTS writing test)

You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task and write at least 150 words.
You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Task: Write a letter to the Principal of the College, explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
You do not need to write your address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm writing to you to request information on scholarship programs available in at Green Pines College.

This year I will graduate from the high school of Gray Rocks Gray Rocks High School and I really hope to continue my education at Green Pines College. I have high average marks in my degree and a strong motivation to learn. But for now at the moment I have some financial problems and I am looking for any aid. Please send me the following information:
1) What kinds of scholarship programs does the college have?
2) What qualities should I have to be eligible for these scholarships?
3) Are there any other kinds of financial support available, such as loans?
4) If none of the above options are relevant to my application, is there any part-time work at your college that is possible to combine with learning?
I need this information as soon as possible, because I have to make decision and plan my further education now. Please, send information to my email, or call me by phone.

Yours faithfully,
Vladimir

Very good Vladimir! It is well written, and has very few corrections.

An alternative ending could be:

Thanking you in anticipation,
Vladimir