Have a good time
I‘m from China，I love English not only because of learning but also my personal interest。And I want to make a lot friends ，and they can help me to improve my English。I love make friends，and I hope you can make friend with me。we can study with each other！
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Have a good time
I‘m from China，I love English not only because I learn, but also because it's my personal interest。I want to make a lot friends that can help me to improve my English。I love make friends，and I hope you can be my friend. 。We can study with each other！
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Have a good time
I‘m from China，I love English not only because of learning, but also my personal interest。I want to make a lot friends, they can help me to improve my English。I love to make friends，and I hope you can make friend with me。we can study with each other！
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Have a good time
I‘m from China，I love English not only because of learning I am studying it, but also because it is my personal interest。I want hope to make a lot friends ，and they who can help me to improve my English。I love make friends，and I hope you can make friends with me。we can study together/with each other！
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Having a Good Time
I‘m from China. I love English not only because of learning but also because I am interested in it. I want to make a lot of friends that can help me improve my English. I love making friends and I hope we can become friends. We can study together!
-Hi, welcome to italki!
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I would repeat the 'because of': not only because of study requirements, but also BECAUSE OF personal interest; omit the 'my'
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