Military Training
I'm a high school student in China.I'm on summer holiday.I had a five-day military training.It was hot to death!Luckily,it was windy.The last day, some students' parents came to see our results.Right at the end,it rained heavily.I was all wet.
Hatefully,after this five days,my skin turned red and my face is more black than before!
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Military Training
I'm a high school student in China. I'm on summer holiday. I had a five-day military training. It was deathly hot to death! Luckily, it was windy. On the last day, some students' parents came to see our results. Right at the end, it started raineding heavily. I was got all wet.
Hatefully (there's nothing wrong with that word, but no one says that:), Unfortunately/Regrettably/Annoyingly after this the five days, my skin turned red and my face is more black than before!
Sounds like a pretty brutal experience, written really well!
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you are funny!
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