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life is so complicated
i am a 30-year-old man i quited my job at during the spring festival, .it is almost 7 months for ago now. i thought i can could find a job easily or at least i can could find a peace time through for this long vacation, but then i find i have a lot to think about in life. Life is not that easy. i want to control my own life but for the past 30 years life has controlled me for in everything. i want to be condident about everything but my personality is bad pessimistic; i am an introverted person. Although and i believe in love, I keep seeking true love which but never find it.
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Life is so complicated.
I am a 30 year old man. I quit my job during the Spring Festival, it has been almost 7 months since then. I thought I could easily find another job, or at least, peace during this long vacation, but all I found is that I have a lot to think about life. Life is not that easy. I want to control my life, but for the past 30 years, life has controlled me. I want to be a confident person, but I feel that my personality is bad, as I am introverted, and while I believe in love and keep seeking true love, I cannot find it.
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Stay positive bro, you'll find it :)
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