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life is so complicated i am a 30-year-old man i quited my job at the spring festival .it is almost 7months for now .i think i can find a job easily or at least i can find a peace time for this long vaction ,but then i find i have a lot to think about life .life is not that easy ,i want to control my life but for the past 30 years life controled me for eveything .i want to be condident about everything but my porsonality is bad i am an introvertive person and i belive in love ,keep seeking true love which i never find.

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life is so complicated

i am a 30-year-old man i quited my job at during the spring festival, .it is almost 7 months for ago now. i thought i can could find a job easily or at least i can could find a peace time through for this long vacation, but then i find i have a lot to think about in life. Life is not that easy. i want to control my own life but for the past 30 years life has controlled me for in everything. i want to be condident about everything but my personality is bad pessimistic; i am an introverted person. Although and i believe in love, I keep seeking true love which but never find it.

 

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Life is so complicated.

 

I am a 30 year old man. I quit my job during the Spring Festival, it has been almost 7 months since then. I thought I could easily find another job, or at least, peace during this long vacation, but all I found is that I have a lot to think about life. Life is not that easy. I want to control my life, but for the past 30 years, life has controlled me. I want to be a confident person, but I feel that my personality is bad, as I am introverted, and while I believe in love and keep seeking true love, I cannot find it.

 

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Stay positive bro, you'll find it :)

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Life isn't complicated, we complicate life. Please don't blame life by your problems. It's our gift, the gift of each human being. Enjoy your life the best way possible! :)

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