A new challenge

Hello people everyone or just say Hello. I'm Nando, and Im trying to improve my english. The problem is alwais always the same. (punto not coma) I do my best learning to learn this language but don't not always take the benefit that I want. Why? It's easy. I can invest a lot of time learning grammar and listening or hearing people speaking english, but when I need to express my feelings any feel, or ideas, my mind blocks out and I can't do it. I bet that i can achive my objectives... but I'm not sure how long that it will take the time that takes me to reach arrive to my goal. I think that the Headline of my post it's very good choosen... " a new challenge"

Blue = natrual

Green = spelling

Purple = grammar

Dear Nando

Your writing is pretty good really - most of my comments are for it to sound natual.

I have the same problem learning Spanish - I forget everything!. Don't worry - English is a hard language to learn so be patient with yourself. :-) Cherie