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Athletics World Cup of Moscow
In This week, it is carrying out the Athletics World Cup in Moscow, Russia. Today was the marathon and it was won by Kiprotich, a great runner from Uganda, and the in second, third and fourth place were for three runners from Etiopia.
A few minutes before, it was the final of 200 m, and the Jamaican Usain Bolt won again. He always wins always and with a lot difference about the rest and is a lot better than the rest. ( I think this is what you are trying to say)
In my country the Athletics isn´t very popular and this is one of reasons that is difficult to watch an Argentinian athletes. in the first places of some competition of athletics.
When the TV show the maraton race When the marathon is shown on tv, I can see some places of Moscow and .I thougth think it was is a beatufil city and some time I want to go. I would like to go sometime.
First attempt at trying to do a correction. I hope I wasnt too critical.
Dave
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