What Is Happiness?

Many people believe that having a lot of money is the greatest happiness in life. But I disagree with them.In my opinion, good health is much better than a lot of wealth. No matter how much money we have, we will not feel happy at all if we are in poor health. In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habits. In addition to good health, we must be diligent at work. As long as we work hard, we cannot just make a good living, but enrich our minds. In addition to that, we ought must to give our helpful hands to others when they are in need. While helping others, we can own a good fame as well as getting more social experience. It's a really good way to kill two birds with one stone. Only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.

In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habit.<= One living habit? How about many living habits or just habits?

What Is Happiness?

Many people believe that having a lot of money is the greatest happiness in life. But I don't agree with them. In my opinion, good health is much better more important than a lot of wealth. No matter how much money we have, we’ll not feel happy at all if we are in poor health. In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habits. In addition to good health, we must be diligent at work. As long as we work hard, we cannot do not just make a good living, but also enrich our minds. In addition, we ought to give offer our helping hands to others when they are in need. While helping others, we can own also acquire good fame reputation as well as getting more social experience. It's really a good way to kill two birds with one stone. Only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.

Good! Well done, well said!