First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a lively girl woking in Hangzhou.I know myself, I am ambitious and want to have a bright future. Sometimes I am just a little woman and like the quite life way,sometimes I clearly know what I want and believe I will be successful anyday. I wanna make friends with all that have been successful or intend to be successful. I believe you must not regret to be my friends!
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Technically, everything you have written is correct and completely understandable. However, a native speaker might have expressed such thoughts a bit differently.
For example, your use of "a little woman". In America we would only call ourselves "a little woman" if we were short and thin. So we would be referring to our physical body size, not a "perception" of ourselves.
Hope this helps?
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