Hello.

I'm expecting good relationships here (on italki).

Key

Red = Spelling/grammar

Green = more natural

(brackets) = optional


Explanation.


1. In English unlike in Korean, you can't drop the subject of a sentence before the verb as easily. People will understand what you mean but in this case it sounds unnatural without a subject, so to be grammatically correct and to form a complete sentence include the subject, I, which becomes I'm.

2. You'll probably talk to many people, so your relationship will become plural, so needs the extra 's'.

3. Without 'on Italki' at the end the sentence would be understood, but I think it sounds more natural with it in.

4. Don't forget your punctuation.

Anyway, welcome to Italki, I hope you have an enjoyable time.