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some strange thoughts I saw pictures that people with whom I studied. Most of them are always get married and have a baby. Are they really happy? I can't imagine how it might be. May it be the main goal in life? I don't think so. It makes me yawn. Most of people can't agree with me. But I am having no doubt that there is another goal in life. Life is much wider. Of course someday I will have a baby, but not now. There are some things in my life which I must do before it and then I will do it with my children. I wish I will become a good mother... someday.

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some strange thoughts

I saw pictures that of people with whom had I studied. Most of them are always have already got married and have children a baby. Are they really happy? I can't imagine how it might they could be. May it Must these be the main goals in life? I don't think so. The thought It makes me yawn. Most of people can't agree with me, but I am having in no doubt that there is another goal in life. Life is much broader and deeper wider. Of course someday I will have a baby, but not now. There are some things in my life which I must do first before it and then I will do it with think about my children. I wish hope (wish=unlikely, hope=possibly) I will become a good mother... someday.

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some strange thoughts

I saw pictures of people with whom I studied. Many of them are already got married and are having children. Are they really happy? I can't imagine how it might be. can(can must be used here instead of may) it be the main goal in life? I don't think so. It makes me yawn. Many people don't agree with me. But I am not having any doubt that there is another goal in life. Life is too wider. Of course, someday I will have a baby, but not now. There are some things in my life which I must do before that and then I will think about children. I wish I will be a good mother... someday.

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some strange thoughts

 

I saw pictures that people with whom I studied.

I saw pictures of people with whom I studied. 

Or:

I saw pictures of people that I went to school with.


Most of them are always get married and have a baby.

Most of them have already got married and had children.


Are they really happy? I can't imagine how it might be.

 

May it be the main goal in life? I don't think so.

Should these be the main goals in life? I don't think so.

or:

Should getting married and having kids really be the main goals in life?


It makes me yawn.

 

Most of people can't agree with me.

Most people wouldn't agree with me.


But I am having no doubt that there is another goal in life.

But there's no doubt in my mind that there are other goals in life.

or:

But there's no doubt in my mind that there is more to life than that.

 

Life is much wider.

Life is much deeper.


Of course someday I will have a baby, but not now.

 

There are some things in my life which I must do before, it and then I will do it with my children.

There are things that I want to do with my life before I have children.

 

I wish I will become a good mother... someday.

I hope I will become a good mother...someday.

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Dmitry, thank you! I just found this example: Так — так вот, целью моей жизни было делать вещи без использования Гельветики. So -- so, my goal in life was to do stuff that wasn't made out of Helvetica. I think "a goal in life" is correct About "I wish", I found my mistake here. I meant "Я хотела бы", I think I should say "I wish I could" :) Спасибо!!!
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Я нашел несколькои. :) are always get married - "are" не нужно. goal in life - кажется, надо говорить of life I am having no doubt - по-моему надо I have no doubt I wish, насколько я знаю, используют если желают кому-то что-то абстрактное (типа добра, счастья и всего наилучшего), либо если жалуются (Хотел бы я быть хорошим отцом). в твоем случае, мне кажется, подойдет I hope.

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