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My Answer to A question in An Interview:Tell Me about Yourself I'm happy to talk about myself. My name is Zhang Yaqin.I come from HeBei Province.I'm 26 years old. I graduated from computer science bachelor degree.And my major is computer software and theory now.I‘m familiar with design and programming based on J2EE and relational databases, including traditional SQL as well as ORM technologies.In addition,I learned design pattern and have used some of them.I can communicate with other members well in a team.And I have skill of problem solving . I worked as an intern in one IT company and I'm a Java programmer.My performance was recognized by the project manager. I once won the third place in the English speech. I've been watching your company for some time now and I've been impressed with your innovative approach and your fast growth.I'd like to be a part of your team.

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My Answer to A question in An Interview:Tell Me about Yourself

I'm happy to talk about myself.


My name is Zhang Yaqin.

I come from HeBei Province.

I'm 26 years old.

 

I graduated from <university name> with a computer science bachelor degree, and my major is computer software and theory now.

I‘m familiar with design and programming based on J2EE and relational databases, including traditional SQL as well as ORM technologies.

In addition, I learned design pattern and have experience applying some of them.

I can communicate with other members well in a team.

I have good problem solving skill. 

 

I used to work as an intern in one IT company as a Java programmer.

My performance was recognized by the project manager.

I once won the third place in the English speech. (in the company? Is this relevant?)


I've been reading about your company for some time now and I am impressed with your innovative approach and your fast growth.

I want to be a part of your team. (show your determination here. "would like" is weak :D  )

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