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I Want to Be A Fish
If I were to a fish, I would be a boiled fish.
Today,I was waked woken up by the heat.
When I was feeding my fish, I had a idea that about being a fish, so that .Thus,I'd feel the cool.
Recently, the air temperature is often higher because of the greenhouse effect .
So, I think it is time to do something that to decrease the discharge of ing greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide (take out the comma so that CO2 attaches to 'gases', not to 'something').
In the daily life, we can save water, and we can go to work by bus as soon as possible.
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That is too much the least we can do.
I Want to Be A Fish
If I were to a fish,I would be a boiled fish.
Today,I was waked up by the hot.
When I was feeding my fish,I had an idea that being a fish.Thus,I'd feel the cool.
Recently,the air temperature is higher because of the greenhouse effect .
So,I think it is time to do something that decrease discharging greenhouse gases ,such as carbon dioxide.
In the daily life,we can save water.We can go to work by bus as soon as possible.
...
That is too much we can do.
I Want to Be A Fish
If I were to a fish,I would be a boiled fish.
Today,I was waked up by the hot.
When I was feeding my fish,I had an idea that being a fish.Thus,I'd feel the cool.
Recently,the air temperature is higher because of the greenhouse effect .
So,I think it is time to do something that decrease discharging greenhouse gases ,such as carbon dioxide.
In the daily life,we can save water.We can go to work by bus as soon as possible.
...
That is too much we can do.
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