The car
The car was created in the century XIX, it worked with a motor of oil, but its velocity was limited, for use familiar. Actually the car adopt differents ways, dipends the destiny for each person. The most of cars reduce the consum of fuel but it win velocity.
The bus was the first public transport vehicle, when the industrial revolution make to grow the cities and the workers had to a long wayto go to work. With the years this transportwas perfectioned, with machines for extend tickets, doors that open and close automatically, etc.
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The car
The car was created in the century XIX, it worked with a motor of oil, but its velocity was limited, for use familiar and people only used it to go short distances. Actually the car adopt evolved in differents ways, dipends depending on the destiny for needs of each type of consumer person. The Most of cars reduce the consumption of fuel but it win velocity.
The bus was the first public transport vehicle and it came about, when, during the industrial revolution, make to grow the cities grew rapidly and the workers had to a long way to go to work. With Over the years this type of transport was perfected perfectioned, with machines for extend tickets, doors that open and close automatically, etc.
Nice work. I wasn't sure what you meant by "tickets" and I also wasn't sure what you meant to say in the second sentence, so please forgive me if I changed the meaning of the sentence.
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