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Short story, please need corrections.
A beautiful spring morning, Mrs and Ms Specter went to spend the sunny day camping near to a lake. Ar At 11 o'clock in the morning, they decided to rent a bote boat and went fishing.
Ms Specter was anxious to eat luch. Suddenly, her husband catched caught a big fish and as he was trying to grab it, her his wife lost her valuable watch into the water.
Finally, they went back to their tent. The inconsolable woman couldn't stop crying. An hour later, meanwhile while the man was preparing the frying-pan in order to cook the lunch, Ms Specter had a grear great surprise, she founf found her watch in the fish when she was cutting it open. "I'm very lucky," she said, with tears of joy rolling down her face.
Excellent job! Very minor mistakes, great vocabulary. Keep up the good work!
Short story, please need corrections.
A beautiful spring morning Mrs and Ms Specter went to spend the sunny day camping near to a lake. At 11 o'clock in the morning they decided to rent a boat and went fishing.
Ms Specter was anxious to eat luch. Suddenly, her husband caught a big fish and as he was trying to grab it her wife lost her valuable watch into the water.
Finally, they went back to their tent. The inconsolable woman couldn't stop cryin. An hour later, meanwhile the man was preparing the frying-pan in order to cook the lunch when Ms Specter had a great surprise, she found her watch in the fish when she was cutting it open. "I'm very lucky," she said, with tears of joy rolling down her face.
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