beijing

I’d like to go to a beautiful place. I think it would be Beijing. Beijing is not only our capital city, but also a famous city with long history and wonderful culture. Beijing is also China’s political and cultural center. There’re many old places of great interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven, and Tiananmen Square. Once you see Tiananmen Square, you will think of Beijing. It has been the symbol of Beijing since 1949.

Beijing

I’d like to go to a beautiful place. I think it would be Beijing. Beijing is not only our capital city, but also a famous city with a long history and wonderful culture. Beijing is also China’s political and cultural center. There are many old places of great interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven, and Tiananmen Square. Once you see Tiananmen Square, you will think of Beijing. It has been the symbol of Beijing since 1949. 

You're English is fantastic here. The sentences make sense but could perhaps need shuffleing.
For example, the first two sentences 'I’d like to go to a beautiful place. I think it would be Beijing.' would sound better as: 'I'd like to go to Beijing as it's a beautiful place.'