Corrections · 4
Another rainy day
In the morning when I left the hourse sky was full of dark clouds. I boarded train. As much as I was getting close to my destination the shower outside became heavier and heavier. When I got down from train. I saw lots people were waiting at the station to stop the rain. Station stairs was fully jam with people. People who want to leave the station as soon as possible was facing very difficulty. Somehow I come out from station and catch a riksha to destination as rain was still going on. Finally I reached. :)
When I left the house this morning the sky was full of dark clouds. I boarded the train. As I got closer to my destination the shower outside became heavier and heavier. When I got down from train I saw lots people were waiting at the station for the rain to stop. The station stairs were jammed full with people. People who wanted to leave the station as soon as possible were facing difficulty. Somehow I managed to get out of the station and caught a riksha to my destination as rain was still going on.
Good use of colloquial terms such as 'jam', you just used it in the wrong way!
- When talking about the past, remember to use the past participle ie 'want' becomes 'wanted'
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