Cherry bonbon
Hey guys, could you point out the mistakes a made in this text, please?
This is another drawing i started sketching at a party while people would yell at me for being so unsocial. ( wouldn't you agree nicole? Haha)
Anyway, i was stuffing myself with cherry bonbons at home when i thought i could make something out of those poor bonbon wrapping papers that were halfway to the rubbish bin.
There is an actual bombom next to her hair with chocolate and all... At least there WAS until my mom ate it up!
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Cherry bonbon
Hey guys, could you point out the mistakes I made in this text, please?
This is another drawing i started sketching at a party while people were yelling at me for being so antisocial. ( wouldn't you agree nicole? Haha)
Anyway, i was stuffing myself with cherry bonbons at home, when i thought to myself i could make something out of those poor bonbon wrapping papers that were halfway to the rubbish bin.
There is an actual bonbon next to her hair with chocolate and all... At least there WAS until my mom ate it up!
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