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Remember & Forget We take pictures,remembering with pictures. We write journals,remembering with words. We hug,remembering with warmth and strength. We put our heads on each others' shoulders or chest,remembering with smell and sound. We replay the time or scene we've spent with that person over and over again in our minds,remembering with memory. And then,just like everyone says,time will make us forget that person. And then,there will always be an instant where all those "remembering" light up and explod.And that person,will be in our mind,clear as ever. Suddenly remembering you is not a good feeling. But I still treasure every chance that I have to create a "memory" with you.

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We put our heads on each others' shoulders or chests, remembering with smell and sound.

We replay the time or scenes we've spent with that person over and over again in our minds, remembering with memory.

And then, there will always be an instant where all those "rememberings" light up and explode once more. And that person will be in our mind, clear as ever.

Always have a space after every punctuation mark. If it's not there, we either don't see it ("and then,just" looks like "and then just") or think you've written two words together ("will be in our mind,clear" looks like "will be in our mindclear").

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