I think there's a lot of good about the above, but it doesn't feel 'natural' to me, so I'll do a correction that can be used as a comparision. Plus understand that this doesn't have to be 'right', it should just help to compare a more 'natural' native English style.

The text inside the braces are notes on why I changed something and what I feel could be changed further.

Back to learning

Hi all,

I'm back to learn how to read and write English. (Or even just: I'm back to learning English.) This tme I will not leave in the middle of my studies. (Note that I'm not sure, but what you said might be correct grammatically, but 'feels' disjointed or even better: This time I will finish my studies. The ambigious 'it' with the previous sentence doesn't 'feel' right, I hope an academic might correct or tell me why this is so). I'm currently interested in meeting people who want to become my friends and help me to overcome my weaknesses in English, which often prevent me from expressing myself and also makes it hard to understand others.
I'm simple straight person.<br>

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