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Write something haa?
I think thought I should write something on italki in order to pratice my writing skill. Today is my first time to comment I have commented on someone's notebook diligently entry with many words much detail, but after subbmitting it, I did could not find my comment. I realise I am so stupid that I even do not know how to use italki (No, you are not ^^). So I solemnly decided to write something here! I registered it last year but have only logged in several times in a month. It's not good for my English learning. Actually, this reminds me that I have registered on many websites. At the first, look I thought they are would be good for me but I do not log in often enough. Some are even forgotten.(shame for me! %>_<%). And by the way, I am 26 years old! Am Do I look much younger than I am? Friend request I recieve from on italki are too much younger than me, I am afraid we have nothing to communicate. Maybe I should change my profile pic, but not now. The picture was took taken two years ago. I have not taken many photos in these two years(tragedy). Oh, I have written so many words above in an instant. Something should be left for tomorrow right? In case I have nothing to say next time. hahaa
*Your English is very good, keep practicing! (加油!~ )
Write something haa?
I thought (think) I should write something on italki in order to practise (to pratice) my writing skill. Today is the (my) first time I have commented (to comment) on someone's notebook entry (diligently) in detail (with many words), but, after submitting (subbmitting) it, I could not find (did not find) my comment. I realise I am so stupid that I even do not know how to use italki. So, I solemnly decreed I would (decide) write something here! I registered it last year but only logged (log) in several times in a month. It's not good for my English learning. Actually, this reminds me that I have registered on many websites. At (the) first, (look) I thought they would be (are) good for me but I do not log in often enough. Some I (are) even forgot.(shame for me! %>_<%). And, by the way, I am 26 years old! Do (Am) I look much younger than I am? Friend(s) requests from italki are too young(er) for (than) me, I am afraid we have nothing to communicate. Maybe I should change my profile pic, but not now. The picture was taken (took) two years ago. I have not taken many photos in these two years(tragedy). Oh, I have written so many words above in an instant. Something should be left for tomorrow right? In case I have nothing to say next time. hahaa
Actually, Hami, your English construction is very good and improved the more I read. Amusing, too. I have just suggested a few grammatical changes but nothing major. Very good.
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