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I'm late today It was very late when I had finished my diary last night. so I was very tired in this morning. 昨晚写完日记已经非常晚了, 今天早上我非常困 It was half past seven when I waked up. It was time to work after thirty minutes. 当我醒来是时已此七点半了, 离上班只有30分钟了. I thought there is no time to have breakfast. I hurried to get up. As soon as I had arrived my company 我想,已经没有时间吃早餐了,我赶忙起床. 当我到达公司, the bell was ringing. I'm hungry whole this morning. 上班铃响了. 今天一上午我很饿. when i login here i found some strange friends had modified my last diary. thank you. 一登陆我发现一些陌生的朋友修改了我昨天的日记. 谢谢.

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I'm late today

It was very late when I had finished my diary last night, so I was very tired in this morning.
昨晚写完日记已经非常晚了, 今天早上我非常困
It was half past seven when I woke up. It was time to work after thirty minutes.
当我醒来是时已此七点半了, 离上班只有30分钟了.
I thought there was no time to have breakfast. I hurried to get up. As soon as I had arrived at my company
我想,已经没有时间吃早餐了,我赶忙起床. 当我到达公司,
the bell was ringing. I was hungry the whole this morning.
上班铃响了. 今天一上午我很饿.
When I logged in here, I found some strange friends had modified my last diary. Thank you.
一登陆我发现一些陌生的朋友修改了我昨天的日记. 谢谢.

 

[Good work.  Did you mean 'strangers' (someone you don't know) instead of 'strange friends' (friends that you know, but who are odd or strange)?]

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