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I decided to have attend graduate school since 3 months ago. Studying was never my thing, especially when I study math, sometimes it just drave drives me crazy. I need to take 4 exams to have finish graduate school, with the increasing pressure of the finding employment more and more college students choose to have go to graduate school to increase their employment opportunities. However, I know it can't make it 100 percent sure that you can I will get a good job once you I have a Master's degree stuff. Ok, some kinda getting a job in China is quite different, like the connections here are important, it's complicated and simple at the same time. I am not saying that to it for complaining or judge, ing but its kinda like the era of competition of family background when your family's lineage was the most important thing here in China now. So the reality makes the student to choose if you they wanna have a good and sometimes stable job. I DONT KNOW WHAT AM I AM SAYING. Just focus on doing things important to you and treat your family and your friends right. HAHA

That's pretty good, well done :) I need to find a job soon too, but I only have an undergraduate degree!

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I decided to attend graduate school 3 months ago. Study was never my thing, especially when I study math; sometimes it just drove me crazy. I need to take 4 exams to attend graduate school, and with the increasing pressure of the employment, more and more college students have chosen to go to graduate school to increase their employment opportunities. I know it won't guarantee 100 percent that you can get a good job once you have a Master's degree. Ok, some kinds of jobs in China are quite different, such as how connections here are important; it's complicated and simple at the same time. I am not saying this as a complaint or judgement but it's kind of like there is an era of competition of family background here in China right now. So the reality makes the students choose whether they want to have a good and sometimes stable job. I DON'T KNOW WHAT AM I SAYING. Just focus on doing things that re important to you, and treat your family your friends right. HAHA.