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Today's Accident After lunch,I was stucked in from of my computer as usual.Suddenly,Mum was coming and told me a surprising news-Daddy’s motorcycle had been stolen! What a mamzing!~That’s his favourite motorcycle which being seemed as “his life” by my father-he had said in the past. He must be fell in sadness now,I thought.Mum had went to help his mood.God bless my poor father!~ In fact,mum doubt the neighbor living near our villa face to face.She extended her personal garden lawlessly while occupied a part of public road in front of our housedoor.And my father were clashed with her for this reason.So,whether she is a instigator which instigated anyone to stole the motorcycle? Nevertheless,we could’t doubt others without evidence. One hour ago,I called my parents up while they way to motor marketplace.To my surprise,Daddy was not too bad.He told me his opinion of this sorrow that the meticulous protect and refit for his motorcycle by him fascinated the thief to stole the motorcycle away. And now,they need to buy a new one cost them at least 5000-6000 RMB. However,the most important for me is that-daddy is fine. :)

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Today's Accident/Mishap/Mischance

After lunch,I was stucked in front of my computer as usual, when suddenly mum was came in and told me a surprising news - Daddy’s motorcycle had been stolen! What a mamzing! How terrible!~ That’s his favourite motorcycle which being seemed "like the love of his life” by my father - he had said as much in the past.
He must be feeling sad in sadness now, I thought. Mum had went gone to help cheer him up his mood. God bless my poor dad father!~
In fact, mum doubt suspected the neighbor living near just opposite our villa face to face. She had extended her personal garden unlawfully so that it while occupied a part of the public road in front of our house frontdoor, and my father were had clashed with her for this reason. So, whether she is a instigator which there was suspicion that she had incited instigated anyone someone to steal the motorcycle.
Nevertheless, we couldn’t doubt others prove our suspicions without evidence.
One hour ago, I called my parents up while they were away in the motorbike marketplace. To my surprise, Daddy was not too bad. He told me his opinion was that it was a shame of this sorrow that the meticulous protect and he had meticulously refit for his motorcycle by him fascinated and that had attracted the thief to steal the motorcycle away.
And now, they need to buy a new one which would cost them at least 5000-6000 RMB (haha 5000? maybe 50,000?).
However, the most important thing for me is that - daddy is fine. :)

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Today's Accident

After lunch, I was stucked in from front of my computer as usual. Suddenly Mum was coming came in and told me a some surprising news: Daddy’s motorcycle had been stolen! What a mamzing! Oh my goodness! ~That’s his favourite motorcycle! which being seemed as It is “his life”, as he had said in the past.
He must be fell in feeling sadness now, I thought. Mum had went wanted to help his mood. God bless my poor father!~
In fact,mum doubt suspected the neighbor living near our villa face to face. She extended her personal garden lawlessly without permission, while occupied a part of public road in front of our housedoor. And my father were clashed with her for this reason. So,whether she is a instigator which instigated anyone to stole did she put someone up to stealing the motorcycle?
Nevertheless, In any case, we could’t doubt others without evidence.
One hour ago, I called my parents up while they were on the way to the motorbike marketplace (shop?).To my surprise, Daddy was not too bad. He told me his opinion of this sorrow (terrible event?). that the meticulous protect and refit for his motorcycle by him fascinated the thief to stole the motorcycle away. In his view, it was his meticulous care of the motorcycle that enticed the thief to steal it.
And now, they need to buy a new one which will cost them at least 5000-6000 RMB.
However, the most important thing for me is that daddy is fine. :)

 

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