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Chasing the Sun
"If you want to chase and catch the sun, first you must work hard, and make it run".
This is a quote which appeared like a light in my mind, as a big torch in the darkness; it keeps me on the learning and into the working.
(I like that you're being poetic! It's also common to say "a light in the dark" and "it just appeared/flashed in my mind" or "it appeared like a flash in my mind"
If you're being poetic in the phrase above you can ignore my following comment :)
I don't know...there is something about this sentence that sounds really odd to me. We generally say "it keeps me on the ball" (keeps me on task/schedule for getting things done) and "I'm into my work" (I'm interested in my work)
Wow this is well written :) great job! I'm a long distance runner so I really love the image you've painted here with your quote! It's motivating! Keep at it!
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