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Fireworks Display I went to Sumidagawa Firework Display with my husband on the evening of last Saturday,but we didn't enjoy ourselves. In Japanese class,I heard from my Japanese teacher that Sumidagawa Firework Display was so famous in Japan that it was worthy of watching,so I decided that I would never miss the chance this year. It was sunny on the morning of that day,and we got up very late as usual.After lunch,both of us were lazy to wash dishes.I started to study and my husband was surfing on the Internet and watchingTV sometimes,suddenly he said that "Look!There is firework display tonight at Sumidagawa not far from our home",I was excited to hear it,and we informed that it would start at 7:00 and end at 8:30 by web,so we were going to arrive there before 7o'clock. continuing...

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Fireworks Display

I went to Sumidagawa Firework Display with my husband on the evening of last Saturday evening,but we didn't enjoy ourselves.  In Japanese class, I had heard from my Japanese teacher that Sumidagawa Firework Display was so famous in Japan that it was worthy of watching, so I decided that I would never certainly not miss the chance this year.
It was sunny on the that morning of that day, and we got up very late as usual (haha always lie in on Saturdays?). After lunch,both of us were too lazy to wash the dishes. I started to studying and my husband was surfing on the Internet and watching the TV also at sometimes, when suddenly he said exclaimed that "Look! There is a firework display tonight at Sumidagawa, not far from our home". I was excited to hear it, and we informed learned from the web that it would start at 7:00 and end at 8:30 by web, so we were going planned to arrive there before 7o'clock.
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