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Look at the picture and write a composition 2 From the picture , we can see that the girl’s parents and grandmother are helping her, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle by herself. what's more, her mother even take some medicine with her . In fact, it is not welll for children. It tell us that parentd shouldn't help children too much. They should have a free hand and let children to be come independent . Many parents have an idea that they must get everthing ready for their children so that the children can spend more time for learning. They never think about that children won't be able to live by himself without their parent in the furture . In conclusion, it is important that children is grown of love and altention, but it should never too much.

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Look at the picture and write a composition 2

From the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and grandmother are helping her, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle by herself. What's more, her mother has even taken some medicine with her .

In fact, this is not good for children. It tells us that parents shouldn't help children too much. They should have a free hand and let children to be come independent .



Many parents have an idea that they must get everthing ready for their children so that the children can spend more time for learning. They never think about that children won't be able to live by themselves without their parent in the furture .


In conclusion, it is important that children are raised with love and attention, but it should never too much attention.

 

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