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Look at the picture and write a composition There are the picture to explain the process for the making of chocolate . First, as we all know, the cocoa from cocao tree, which is grown in S A merican 、Africa and Indonesia coutry. Once the pod are ripe and red . The are harvested and white cocoa beans are removed. Then, they are laid out on a large tray, and put they under the sun. They are placed into large sacks when they fermented. Next, they are delivered to the factory. they are roasted at a temperature of 350 degrees. which the beans are crushed and separated from their outer shell . Finally, this inner part that is left is pressed and the chocolate is produced.

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Look at the picture and write a composition

 

There are the picture to explain the process for the making of chocolate .
Here is a picture to explain the process of making chocolate:


First, as we all know, the cocoa from cocao tree, which is grown in S A merican, Africa and Indonesia coutry.

First the cocoa is harvested from the cocoa tree, which grows in South America, Africa, and Indonesia.

 

Once the pod are ripe and red . The are harvested and white cocoa beans are removed.

Once the pods are ripe and red, they are harvested and the white cocoa beans are removed.

 

Then, they are laid out on a large tray, and put they under the sun.

Then they are laid out on a large tray and put under the sun to dry.

 

They are placed into large sacks when they fermented.

They are placed in large sacks to ferment.

 

Next, they are delivered to the factory. they are roasted at a temperature of 350 degrees.

Next, they are delivered to a factory, where they are roasted at a temperature of 350*C.

 

which the beans are crushed and separated from their outer shell .

After roasting the beans are crushed and separated from their outer shell.

 

Finally, this inner part that is left is pressed and the chocolate is produced.

Finally, the inner bean is pressed and chocolate is produced!


I corrected it as you composed it, but you got the steps a little out of order I noticed. Fermentation should come before the drying.

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