First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi my name is wilson bocanegra
i am from colombia
i am working in a coffee-bar and i like play football soccer
i have one son

Hi my name is Wilson Bocanegra,I am from Colombia.
I have one son,I work at a coffee/bar and I like to play football and soccer.

Pretty good but capitalize please.Your grammar is really good though!
work on sentence structure. ^^

I think I did horrible...