Myself part 2
Today I woke up early in the morning hoping to meet the sunrise. I happily got out of bed and immediately went to the window. When I looked through it, I saw a dark mist, gray clouds and the terrible sparrows. After this picture outside the window, I decided a little more sleep
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Becouse I don't like this kind of birds:)
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I'm curious why the sparrows were terrible.
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Myself part 2
Today I woke up early in the morning, hoping to meet the sunrise. I happily got out of bed and immediately went to the window. When I looked through it, I saw a dark mist, gray clouds, and the terrible sparrows. After this picture outside the window (just a suggestion: "After seeing this, I decided..."); I decided to get a little more sleep.Good job overall. The only problems I found had to do with the use of commas.
Don't forget to put the comma before "and" in a list.
You needed a comma after "morning" and before "hoping" because "hoping to meet the sunrise" is not a complete sentence. This is hard to explain. The phrase further explains the first part of the sentence, but is not alone it's own sentence. To join them correctly, you add a comma.
Because "After this picture outside the window, I decided to get a little more sleep" are two complete sentences, you can only join them by using a semicolon (;) instead of a comma (,).
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