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A nice friend Yesterday,a friend from Australia make name for me,I feel so happy. he also help me recording it.He is very nice,lovely.and the voice sounds Seductive.now ,I must try my best way to studying English as i want to chat with him.

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A nice friend

Yesterday,a friend from Australia gave me a name, and for me I feel so happy. he also helped me recording it. He is very nice, and lovely. His voice now sounds seductive to me. now. I must try my best way to studying English, as I really want to chat with him.

 

Very good! You do have some weakness in your conjunctions, tenses, and punctuation, but otherwise nothing terrible. As they say, love knows no boundaries. I wish you all the best with your new best friend =)

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A nice friend

Yesterday,a friend from Australia make made a name for me.  I feel so happy. He also helped me recording it.He is very nice and lovely. His voice sounds seductive now. I must try my best way to studying English because i want to chat with him.

Very good!  

Note: The term 'seductive' is generally a romantic term.  I would not use it to describe someone who is simply a friend.  Another more common word would be soft or soothing.

Have fun chatting with your Australian friend! :D

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Hai, "LET ME TRY TEACHING YOU HOW TO SPEAK INSTEAD OF WHAT TO SPEAK". Hope if you are in a real & serious search of a right English language practicing partner, Here's to share my time with type or voice chat through skype only. I come forward to help you & meet me at [email protected]
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A very personable essay Jasmine. Your conversations will probably be very fun.

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